Because you re-submitted this you can delete this one now
Because you re-submitted this you can delete this one now
Yeah but the link on http://www.newgrounds.com/account/flash/edit# doesn't work :S
Decent.
There were no voices, so don't even care about it, really.
The animation was great, but the background wasn't as good as the animation, but it has the wrong rating cause a caught a bit of blood in the end. But boy, that skater had some very cool tricks!
But there was no preloader or play button or replay, but it did loop.
And very funny!
Your score is an 8.
Wow, you're the first one to leave some REAL feedback:) I didn't think about the rating I'll try to change that.
Ok...
...you got the basics of how a baby is made, but only 2 or 1 part(s), you only showed that the sperm goes into the egg, BUT THE EGG...doesn't look like that. But i liked how you got some Mario sounds in, and the baby thing, but what about the other things on how to make a baby?
You got the most important part of making a baby, and that's all that fairly Important, but whoever doen't know about that, will think the sperm is actully called an eddie, and when that eddie goes in the egg, it turns into a :O, and they will also be wondering how the egg is made and the sperm(or eddie) and if the baby comes out in an instant.
I'd say 1.5, rounded to 2, so you get 2 stars.
2 stars = You can do better.
this review actually made me lol, yea, of course I can do better also because it was just made in a flash (no pun intended) and... well idk, I'll do something better when I have the time
Dude...
Father-of-Death...make him submit taht music.'
Nice flash! Could use a preloader and needs a proper loop.
Indeed.
*laughs*
Funny! I liked the music, yet the background, but how is this a clock day entry, without clocks? And B? And how did 5 ppl make this?
Little-Rena, the person that wastes 10 seconds of 5,284(the number of views) ppls life, gets a 7.
Annoying.
Yet, this needs to be way better, how the heckity heck did this even get a score of 4.00?
BUT! I did like how you could get a picture of the flash portal and strawberry clock.
Little-Rena, u got a 2.
You don't know about clock day, go learn your NG history!
Could be improved.
Yet, you do need good flash skills to get a daily prize, and having 200 friends is cheating, i did like the animation, but this is not how you get a daily, sorry Little-Rena.
I know it isn't, you failed to see the joke, good work.
Impressive!
Never seen anything like this, in 1 hour for all this, amazing!
10/10! Happy?
Better!
Like it, it's not too much like ducks going quack!
But, you said you were gonna use voices, and that when i was about to hit play on the minigame, it skipped it!
You get an 8 for this.
Fixed, I hope you like it. I will get voices for the third I PROMISE. It is a milestone so I won't forget.
I like it.
Can i say more? But It's Lock-Approved by me? Yes, it's Lock-Approved by me.
-LL, DopplerLock.
(P.S: It's on my favs.)
Thanks a lot!
What am i a man of? (inactive old account)
Age 21, Male
Animator, Musician
Somewhere
Joined on 7/5/10